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March 1st, 2007, 7:22 pm

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Reply whitechocolate, February 20th, 2007, 1:01 am

Interesting, I can see you're jumping into this plot headfirst. Good art, try to keep your panels moving in a clear direction so the reader can follow what's going on without having to think about it (sorry, I've got a facination with giving critiques -_-' The panels just seemed a little disjointed to me in this one, namely the uniform panel. Sorry). You've got the beginnings of a good comic here, keep it up! ^_^ Thanks for your comment on 'Monarchy' by the way.

Reply hggusagi, February 20th, 2007, 1:25 am

Thanks for the critique! I know I'm not really good at this and the uniform, I understand, since it was shortly thought of. If I get the time I'll fix my errors. Don't worry about critques, they're welcome. I heard far more scary critques from someone close to me. -_-'

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